- Independently revise and rework writing.
- proofread to check for spelling and grammar
- crossing out unnecessary parts
- use a dictionary/thesaurus
- making sure it makes sense
- seek and give feedback and feedforward on own and others writing
- craft and recraft writing in response to feedback
If I was invisible for a day 30/8/17
If I was invisible for a day I would prank everyone by wrapping a piece of cloth on my head and say in a horrific bold voice "booo" I would also go over to Zarlia's house and get revenge for her toilet papering my house.
To get revenge for her nasty crime I'm going to blow an air horn into her ear while she's sleeping. Then as soon as she would wake up she would go "aaaaahh" but then I would pop a rotten apple into her mouth so I wouldn't go deaf!
Next, I would probably go to the biggest pizza place in town, The mighty Slice. I would also secretly eat all the mouth watering pizza. The olives topped on my pizza were disturbingly staring at me waiting to be eaten.
My journey was as exciting as a child getting candy!
By Radha
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